What do you think about your best
friend? Do you think having a best friend is important? Do you ever adore with
your best friend? For me having a best friend is really important. I can live
without computer and TV but, I can’t live without a best friend. Living without
a best friend is like crumbly. My best friend is someone who cares and always
besides me whenever I feel happy or sad. Gita Dewa Huti is my best friend. I adore
in every single thing about her, such as her appearance, her personality, and
the way she cares to me.
From her head to her toes, Gita is
one of good looking members in the class. Her dark eyes and long black hair
give her an instantly intimidating look. Her eyes usually gleam soft and
bright. She has a pointed nose. Gita blessed with height and propositional body
shape. Moreover, most of my male friends give her eight or better on the body
scale. Some of my male friends do not pause to gaze down upon her face and
shoulder when Gita walks in front of them.
In addition, Gita has a good
personality. She is a responsible person. She always takes care everything
well. Gita is also an organize girl. That’s why she can manage her time and
schedule very well. Gita often shows her empathy if her friends get a hard time
(sadness), for example: Gita will help her friends by giving advice if her friends
need it. She loves her parents so much. She always listen every advice from
them. I think, she is a polite girl because she knows how to talk to someone
who is older than her.
Gita is a really good friend for me.
She is the person who understands me well. She always cares to me. When I have
a problem, she will give me a piece of advice and help me to solve the problem.
Furthermore, she is a reliable person and sometimes I tell my secret to her and
she can keep the secret very well. I think, I am very lucky that having a best
friend like her.
I’ve tried to describe my best
friend that I adore so much. With hope, everyone can see my best friend as I do
through the power of my words. I still look at her and adore the swift grace in
her movements. She ceases to amaze me with her appearance, good personality,
and the way she cares to me.
well, your writing is good, you describe your friend clearly. From your writing i can feel that your friend is so kind and interesting girl.
ReplyDeletei don't find any mistakes on your writing.
good job :)
your writing is very good lisna. your thesis statement also involved in every paragraph.
ReplyDeletein addition may be you can use "friend" or "student" to change "member" in sentence "Gita is one of good looking members in the class" because we aren't in a group. overall i like your writing lisna :) good job :)
Thank you so much lisna for describing me :* ({})
ReplyDeleteI really like your story and also the way you describe about me :)
your writing is good lisna
but I think in the second paragraph ' Her eyes usually gleam soft and bright', this sentence should be ' Her eyes are usually gleam soft and bright' .
I think this sentence should add 'be'.
overall, I love your story Lisna :)
Thanks