How to clean Your Messy Room after
a Party
Topic
sentence : It’s easy to clean
your messy room after a party if you follow these seven simple steps.
Topic :
clean your messy room
Controlling idea : follow these seven simple steps.
Supporting idea :
1.
Prepare all equipments that you need.
2.
Using plastic gloves in your hands
3.
Take all the rubbish in your room into
rubbish bin
4.
Clean all stuffs in your room by feather
duster, rag and water
5.
Put all stuffs one by one in appropriate
place
6.
Clean up your room using the equipment
7.
Put some aroma therapy as you like,
place or hang in any places as you desired.
How
to Clean Your Messy Room after a Party
It’s easy to clean your messy room
after a party if you follow these seven simple steps. First, you need to
prepare all the equipments before you begin to clean the room. These equipments
can be broom, rag, pail, water, feather duster, plastic gloves, poly bag and
rubbish bin. Second, take plastic gloves and using it to make sure your hands
clean during your clean up the room. Then, take all the rubbish in your messy
room into rubbish bin. After that, throw away your rubbish from rubbish bin
into poly bag. You need maybe several minute to make your messy room clean from
the rubbish. After all the rubbish take away from your room, the next step is
clean all stuffs in your room by feather duster, rag and water. After that,
clean everything well and put all stuffs one by one in their appropriate place.
If in your messy room too many stuffs and these so heavy to put by yourself, you
can ask your brother or sister to help you in putting that. Then, you can clean
up your room using the equipments like broom, feather duster and rag. Sweep the
floor whole your room using your broom until there is no dust and you can follow
the next step by using rag and pail. The equipment can help you to make your
floor brighter and cleaner. For the last step, you can put some aroma therapy
as you like to make the delicate scent flowers to enhance your room. Place or
hang in it any places as you desired. Finally, your messy room can change into
your usual room before your make a party. Your room will be looking cleaner,
fresh, beautiful and of course you can relax and then enjoy to spend your time
after clean up the room there. I also suggest you to follow these simple steps
with your sister or brother for makes your job easily and more fun. So, there
is no word for you to afraid having a messy room after make a party if you
follow these simple and easily steps.
take plastic gloves and using ... I think it 'using' should be use. it first..
ReplyDeletesecond in sentence 'maybe several minute " minute' i think its should be 'minutes'
third in sentences 'If in your messy room too many stuffs' maybe you can change become " If in your messy room there are many stuffs"
fourth, again i found in sentence "you can clean up your room using the equipments like broom " using " should be use .. i think.
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